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The
Cruise
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story)
It was a dark and stormy night.
The wind howled, and the water, glassy smooth an hour ago, tossed
the boat about, making Nigel wonder if he had found that legendary
whirlpool and would soon be meeting Neptune. The clouds were not
yet a solid mass, and when the moon peeked through for a few seconds,
he saw the bare mast bend left and then right. All at once, he
heard a faint sound. It was a dull roar like the surf pounding
on a rocky shore. Had he miscalculated his position? His GPS was
kaput; he was using dead reckoning from the position he had gotten
from a passing freighter earlier that day. He shouldn’t be anywhere
near land. He listened again. It was unmistakable now.
Then, as the moon peeked through
the clouds again, he saw it - breakers against a long, low black
reef, where there should have been no land at all. The moon winked
out. The sound got louder. At the next flash of moonlight, he
saw the reef again and froze. He was almost on top of it, the
edge he was heading towards had the letters "ARU" neatly
painted on it and there was a life-jacketed body tied to a line
that was tangled in the great freighter's scupper. (contributed
by Laszlo)
Nigel held his breath, waiting
for the moon to illuminate the gruesome sight once more. His mind
was all a-tangle with fear (would he end up like the body, dashed
and tangled on the reef?), self-doubt (did he really see a body
or was it the lingering effect of the 5 martinis he had for lunch?)
and curiosity (ARU..now where had he seen those letters before
hmm?). Wind gusted the capricious clouds again and the moon shone
her ghastly light on the reef-that-should-not-be-there. He was
not hallucinating. The body still gently rocked and bumped in
the wind like one of those cool Chinese glass floats in a fishing
net. Nigel assumed the poor bloke was dead. But as the waves,
seemingly with a will of their own, nudged him ever closer...he
was not so sure. (contributed by Cara)
A hole in the clouds overhead allowed
the moon to shine on the face. Nigel looked down into the water.
It was a young face, clean shaven but bruised and swollen. The
hair was straight and cut short. Nigel put a gaff into his coat
and drew him to the boat. With some difficulty he looped a line
around his chest and heaved him aboard. He wasn't stiff, but limp
as a noodle. Nigel wasn't a big man, but he was wiry and fit and
managed to get the awkward bundle aboard without mishap. Once
on deck, he laid the body out flat and started going through his
pockets looking for some kind of identification. There was nothing
in the coat pockets, but as Nigel turned him over to continue
the search, the dead man gasped and then vomited vigorously onto
the deck. Nigel held the mans head, and when he had finished and
somewhat recovered, Nigel lifted him into a sitting position and
received another great surprise. He was a woman. (contributed
by Dave Hahn)
An ear-splitting scream jolted
Nigel back to reality. He had no idea how long he'd been holding
the woman, but the color had returned to her face, and her eyes
were now sharply focused. She was screaming at him and wildly
pointing at something behind him. As Nigel turned to look, he
was about to reassure her that they were in no danger; as he'd
approached the freighter he had dropped his anchor and carefully
let out the line so he could drop back just enough to reach her
with his gaff. Actually, he'd thought himself a little clever
for having figured out how to rescue her without endangering himself
and his boat. Then Nigel saw what had terrified her. The anchor
must have dragged, and the breakers were just meters behind his
boat. He dropped the still screaming woman and leapt to start
his engine. With a murmured "please start" he turned
the key and was relieved that it actually started. He put it in
gear and went forward to pull in the anchor line. As the line
became vertical he realized the anchor had not only finally caught,
but had wedged itself under a coral head. "Damned anchors,"
he thought, "and why is that crazy woman was still screaming
at me?" Then it hit him. It wasn't English. Forgetting the
anchor line, he turned and asked her if she spoke English. She
just kept screaming. Now completely frustrated, Nigel shouted
- over the chugging engine, over the howling wind, over the roaring
breakers, over the woman's screams "DO .... YOU .... SPEAK
.... ENGLISH?" She stopped screaming. And then for a long
moment they just stared at each other. (contributed by Chris
Stewart)
She lowered her eyes and started
in surprise when she looked at the log book in the book case.
Nigel had filled his old one, and had written "June 2003-"
on the spline. The woman pointed at the book, speaking rapidly,
and with some agitation pointed to to ship behind them and the
book on the shelf. Nigel had no hope of understanding the words
but was hopeful that his skill at charades would help bridge the
gap. He handed her the log book, and she opened it. She turned
page after page, not reading the text but looking at the dates.
She pointed at each one and remarked on them with machine-gun
rapidity. Nigel had been around and knew smatterings of Spanish,
French, German and even a little Greek. The language was musical
in tone, but he couldn't pick anything out of it. She again pointed
at the dates in the book and back at the ship on the reef. He
got the connection and pointed to her, to him, the log book and
then the ship. She smiled and nodded. Nigel had no desire to board
the ghost ship on the reef but decided that he might at least
look the old wreck over in the light of the new day. Looking at
the ship with a critial eye, he could see that it wasn't a freighter,
but looked more like an old minesweeper. Getting out his binoculars
he could see the name painted on the bow, part of it faded and
stained, part new and bright. The ship's name seemed to be "Palau
Aru". (contributed by Dave Hahn)
An uncontrollable shiver slowly
crawled up Nigel's spine as he struggled to hold his binoculars
level on the name. Slowly he began to scan the ship for clues.
"Palau Aru" he repeated again and again, hoping that
by sheer will he could wring meaning from the name. Palau Aru
was distantly and uncomfortably familiar, but where and when had
he heard the name before? Was it in a local pub, or was it at
a briefing for a covert operation years ago? Not knowing made
him uneasy, but he was even more uneasy about his GPS and radio
suddenly going down. As the stern came into view, Nigel slowly
reversed his scan. Suddenly his binoculars froze on a porthole.
Nigel waited until he saw the movement a second time. "Palau
Aru", he whispered, "Palau Aru." (contributed
by Bob Peckham)
His musings were cut short by the
slap of a wave on the side of the boat as it drifted beam to the
wind. "Best to get away from here," he thought. After
checking around the stern for lines and debris in the water, he
put the boat in gear and turned the bow away from the dark hulk
at low revs, minimum noise, minimum spash. He tried to make sense
of the clues. Twice he had scanned the binoculars past the porthole,
and twice a face had ducked away. He was being watched, and the
watcher must have known about the woman now huddled on the forward
thwart. What was her relation to the invisible watcher, and why
was she in the sea? A new break in the clouds uncovered the full
moon. Was that the significance of the dates, that tonight was
the full moon? (contributed by Peter Vanderwaart)
The full moon lit the compass,
and the steady thump of the motor took Nigel and his passenger
away from the wrecked hulk. Good judgment would have told him
to keep going, but it was not his style to leave, at least not
until he had a few more answers. Once a safe distance out, he
cut the motor and went below. He soon reappeared with warm clothes,
and motioned the woman to go below. She shook her head and looked
away. Nigel stood looking at her for a moment. He was not accustomed
to having his suggestions ignored. "Ok miss, have it your
way.," he said, dropping the clothing and a blanket in front
of her. In a few minutes, he looked back and she was wrapped in
the blanket with only her face showing. Her wet clothes lay in
a pile beside her. She stared back at him managing a shy smile,
and he could see the bruising on the right side of her face wasn’t
as bad as he had first thought. He could also see she was young,
probably in her early twenties. She reminded him of the hundreds
of refugees he had seen over the years. Back then, leaving those
people behind had been the hardest part of his job . Glancing
first at the girl and then at the stranded ship, he whispered,
"This time nobody gets left behind." Nigel had given
up hope of finding a common language, but spoke to the girl anyway.
"Tomorrow I need to go back and check things out but we are
safe here tonight." He was surprised when she slowly nodded
her head as if agreeing. "I bet you would agree to anything
I say wouldn’t you?" Again she slowly nodded her head.
Amused with his little game Nigel moved closer to the woman and
whispered, "One more thing you should know. In my country
I am considered a god." This time the young woman didn’t
nod agreement. For an uncomfortable moment she simply looked up
at him. Finally she whispered, "Yes, you a good god."
(contributed by Bob Peckham)
"So, how are you going
to get out of this one, laddy?" asked Giles, looking up from
his keyboard. Writing had always been easy for him: create a character,
get him into trouble, and then figure out how to get back out
- along with the girl, the treasure, the ... well, the rest was
really just details. But this time Giles was stuck. The storm,
the girl, the boat, now what? As he often did when he took a break,
he looked down at the lake to see his own boat resting at her
mooring. But when the moon peeked through the clouds he saw she
was gone! His first thought was that she had been stolen, but
who would go out on a night like this? The mooring line must have
frayed through. He jumped up from his desk and ran down to the
lake, getting his dinghy off its rack and into the water in one
smooth motion. Grabbing his oars, but forgetting his life jacket,
he got in his dinghy and pulled away from shore. Rowing downwind,
he put every ounce of strength into trying to catch up to his
boat. He had to catch her before she was driven onto the rocks
at Green Point. All at once, he heard a faint sound. It was a
big lake and the wind was howling, but it sounded just like surf
pounding on a rocky shore. The moon peeked through the clouds
for a few seconds, and he turned to look for his boat. He saw
the bare mast swing left and then right. The wind howled, and
the water, glassy smooth an hour ago, tossed the dinghy about,
making Giles wonder if he would soon be meeting Nigel. It was
a dark and stormy night. (by Chris Stewart)
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